English Draft

today in class we started our first lesson correcting our drafts for Chineses Cinderella. Once i finished I sent it off to the whole class so they could help me with suggestions to improve my essay. This way at least one person should be able to help me! I have continued reading Dog Boy and decided that so far it definetly shows the transition from rags to riches. It has also affected me as when it is sad i feel sad for around an hour and when it is happy i feel happy!